Today is Monday. I get up at 6:00.  I eat breakfast at  about 6:30. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth. I  have noodles for breakfast. I go to school at 7:00. I go to school by father’s car.We have four classes in the morning.  At 11：00. I am hungry. I have lunch at school. I take a nap at 12:30. We have two classes in the afternoon. I have  computer class and English class on Tuesdays. I like them  very much. I go home at 5:30. I do homework after school.  I watch TV with my sister at 8:30. Then I wash my face and  brush my teeth. I go to bed at 9:40.

教师点评：罗宇泰同学的小作文能围绕My Day这一主题展开写作，介绍一天的活动情况；能综合运用所学的知识丰富内容，如：I  have  noodles  for  breakfast. We  have  two  classes  in  the  afternoon.作文中还运用了一些新的词汇，如：take a nap， brush  my  teeth。

建议：如果句式能不拘泥于本课所学的句型：I … at …就更好